Luna

by S.S. Rose

Published October 28, 2010

In Poetry

“Luna”

Moon-painted water –
A million tides of black evening silk
Speckled with salty white and moaning with
The deepest of blues

I am upon the edge, or rather I am the brink
The hair’s breadth, the heart’s beat
My voice, thought, dream awakens the seas
And yet water is heartless, soulless…cold.

If only I could in this way recall a lover
Or milk-glass Sunday afternoons
(Seen through a haze of grey clouds like lost feathers)
The white light of the morning after

Oh, sweet adoring arms encompassing
My world where even night is filled
With bright starry fire:
Will you not come away awhile?

Be beckoned from my memory
Return to me, return to me
I ever loved a shadow-man and yet
One can’t hold a shadow’s hand.

Sighing selahs, a peaceful gnawing
Of deep-sea teeth and moonbeams –
Like oil in water, flecks of light
Return with every evening’s tide, and cannot fade.

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IgnisandGlacialis wrote a review Review · Oct 29, 2010

Hi!
I'm speechless. This is absolutely amazing; beautiful. You got my breath catching in my throat. I want so much to say how much I love this poem - but I can't find the words. I was immediately drawn in by the title - 'luna', moon, is somehow a very beautiful word. I really don't know - you've caught me out. I have nothing to say.
It was absolutely amazing. I don't think I've read a better poem on YWS yet.
God bless you,
Ignis

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chynelk5 commented Comment · Oct 28, 2010

This is beautiful <3
It's hard to find poetry like this on y.w.s.
Please keep writing!



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